anatomy of a solid 5/6 introduction

"When a little girl has a fatal disease and is afraid to die, she could do anything to keep the deadly secret to herself.  In “The Use of Force” by William Carlos Williams, a doctor tells the story of his encounter with a girl suffering from such a deadly curse. The girl is very quiet and their parents like to speak for her.   The child’s struggle against death brings out the worst in the doctor, whose emotions change from nice and responsible to aggressive, disrespectful and violent."

OPENING IS GENERAL STATEMENT THAT INTEGRATES KEY DETAILS FROM STORY 

When a little girl has a fatal disease and is afraid to die, she could do anything to keep the deadly secret to herself.

ATPP STATEMENT SERVES AS SPECIFIC STATEMENT ABOUT THE STORY INCLUDING ESSENTIAL TEXTUAL INFORMATION

  In “The Use of Force” by William Carlos Williams, a doctor tells the story of his encounter with a girl suffering from such a deadly curse.

MAP ATTEMPTS TO GET JUST ENOUGH CONTEXT OF THE STORY TO MAKE THESIS UNDERSTANDABLE

 The girl is very quiet and their parents like to speak for her.   

THESIS IS ON TASK FOR THE PROMPT, ADDRESSED WHY THE CHARACTER CHANGES AND GIVES DESCRIPTIVE DIMENSIONS FOR THE CHANGE

The child’s struggle against death brings out the worst in the doctor, whose emotions change from nice and responsible to aggressive, disrespectful and violent.