a good start:
In the story, the author describes the mother as "very clean and apologetic." This helps support . . .
an improvement:
Even in describing the mother, the author uses relatively contradictory terms. She is called both "clean and apologetic", which may seem normal at first, but reveals the doctor's condescending view of the family. After all, the fact that she is clean would be expected of an average upper class mother. But here, he brings it up as a point of interest.
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